I like this format. Probably more so than your last. I guess beauty is in the eye of the beholder eh?
The rhyming couplets are effective in that they are spaced and allow this reader to digest their content.
A dark theme again and one that many on here will relate to. Darkness: a feeling of loneliness and despair. A feeling that no one understands or even cares. With all this frustrated anger going no where one often internalises it.
This is my favourite couplet, a real dark one too: Around your throat grasps its cold, dark hand
Dragging you down where no one understands.
Getting these feeling out on the page and sharing is an excellent way to heal.