If I am not mistaken this is a villanelle. The repetition of some lines is evident. It's a good read. It has a haunting atmosphere. My only suggestions is to delete those symbols that appear on your poem.

The symbols usually appear when there's "an extra space" between words or after the line ended. The way to fix them, it's to make sure that there are no extra spaces.

Example...

Hello ( there are 3 spaces between Hello and the parenthesis)

It should be like

Hello (have only one space between the hello and the parenthesis)

I hope this helps.