Hello Melissa,

A soft, beautifully descriptive and sensual piece here that reads beautifully.

"No, it was the fissure at the nape of my spine that let you in."

^^^^^

Love that line and I love your use of metaphor throughout this piece.

Well done on another great poem.
All the best,
Ben

Love this Melissa

Much love
Michael :)x

Well penned, Melissa and good use of metaphors