Comments : Our Geography

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Melissa,

    A soft, beautifully descriptive and sensual piece here that reads beautifully.

    "No, it was the fissure at the nape of my spine that let you in."


    Love that line and I love your use of metaphor throughout this piece.

    Well done on another great poem.
    All the best,

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Love this Melissa

    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Well penned, Melissa and good use of metaphors