Comments : As if they were your Love

  • 8 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Hah hah, like crib notes set to poetry

    Nicely done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Another unique write, Lucero, that put a smile firmly on my face. Cleverly written with a fine sprinkling of wisdom!

    All the best,
    Ben