Comments : Your crimes

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    I wrote this for a dear friend of mine whose son is currently incarcerated for the above mentioned crime. She's devastated and blames herself for his choices. We can only raise our kids with values and hope they make the right choice as they become adults.

  • 8 years ago

    by Spontaneity

    I have read this poem more than once. In the work that I do, I have had to come into contact with people that have turned down the wrong paths of life. Some have tried to get back on the right path, while others seem to just keep on continuing down the broken road. Meth is usually the downfall in my area...is has affected so many families, and it tortures me to see what it does to the children. I often pray that they do not turn out like their parents.

    Very heartfelt...I can feel the anguish the family must feel for the child's transgressions. I would not consider this a dark poem though, I would consider it to be more sad than dark, but then again that is just how I read it.

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you for the wonderful words. I guess I put this in the dark poems because of the content, he's incarcerated because of computer crimes involving images of children. I really struggled with how I feel about him, I've known this boy since he was a baby. I was devastated for his mom because I know she's been beating herself up over his actions. On one hand she's sickened over his crimes, on the other she's still his mom and worries about his safety at where's he's at and what he's done. When I first put this poem out there I was worried that the subject matter had repulsed too many people. The only way I could put my feelings to words was to attempt to put myself in his moms (my friend) shoes and hopefully understand a little better.