Comments : Wanton (Pleiades)

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Hellon,

    Like a complex timepiece this poem is perfectly presise.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Beautifully done Hellon,

    Take care Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judge Comments:

    Hellon nails this form, just a splendid poem by Hellon this week!

    I have true adoration for this poem, it takes you to a place of possible rice fields, working your fingers to the bone, for pennies I'm sure, just to make wantons.. I may be way off but I do see this visually in my head.... Hellon's poetry makes you think and that is what adds such beauty to this poem! well done!!