Hello,

Confidence is like an egg shell, you feel it, look at it and seems hard, but it can all too soon break, releasing a fragile goo.
^
This is the image that came to mind as I started to read. The fragile goo is not harmless though, it is full of emotions, frustration and 'rage' so I guess a better description would be larva - boiling and ready to spit and burn anyone who gets too close.

My advice is to let off a little steam regularly to keep a lid on the volcano

Sorry for the rambling - that's what I tend to do.

A good write from you both. Please write more...

Take care,

Michael

Quite a confident piece:).
In every word there is some kind of power. Wonderful poem.
Keep writing.
5/5
~S

Quite a nice piece. Keep penning.

Good poem.

Wow what a heart wrenching, gripping piece. Captivating from start to finish.
Flawless.

This poem with its rich filled imagery is just perfect