Hello Heather,

usually I welcome new members, but from your profile you have been a member before. Anyhow, welcome back, nice to see you posting a new poem...

The title intrigued me at first, I though a tribute to God, or an actual King. As I read through the gushing tribute, I discovered it is for a man who lives far away. This distance creates emotions to become concentrated, powerful, all consuming. This is clear from your writing.

I wish you both all the best for the future.

Keep writing Heather,

Michael

Hello Heather

Nice to read a poem about such a passionate and complete love on the site. It really does come across as all consuming, as Mr Darcy remarks.
"see there's a place in me where your fingerprints still rest"

^^^^^^^

I love that line.

Well done and all the best,
Ben

Heather,

Such a deep in-depth love to the one you love. Powerful and emotional.

Take care Em