Comments : My mind

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    At times we feel the need to be alone far away from that what makes our mind run far and fast.
    The soothing silence makes us wanna never come out of the hiding. After all, we will have to break out of it and continue living.

    This a lovely poem with much to learn from.
    Continue writing.... wish to read more of your such poem.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Thank you so much! I totally agree, some days I would like to just hide out, but alas it's back to the craziness we call life.

  • 8 years ago

    by Kevin

    The feeling of wanting to be alone with yourself :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Being alone can be a good thing at times...:)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi Brenda,

    Love this one especially as being a parent I don't get to be 'alone' often with my own thoughts so it strikes such reality and sometimes it's nice to get lost in them.

    A good wrote with deep meaning.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thanks Em! I definitely agree with not getting much alone time with kids underfoot. We need to carve out some time for ourselves so we don't lose who we are, it's too easy as mothers, wives, workers.