Moe,

Beautiful written but so sad. Full of raw emotion. Sorry that you feel this way.

Take care, Em

Well this gets to me.........

Very powerful writing by you Moe-

The stanzas are wonderfully placed together..

awesome poem from you!

I can relate.... I have written a number of such...and no matter how much we call unto death to release us and set us free, it never happen.

Hang in there,
Fate has something waiting for our services.

Great write.
Impressive indeed.

Take Care.
Shankymuigai