Comments : Addiction

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Michael,

    A well written poem. I like the format being held by a sturdy 6 line pivot.

    Being held at arms length and only able to be a supportive observer must be frustration. Your devotion and patience will pay dividends.

    Well done,

    Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mr Darcy for your comments and yes absolutely frustrating

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi Michael,

    Great structure and rhyme which makes the piece flow smoothly.

    It's frustrating to be held at arms length.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em for your feedback. Arms length can be a world away