Comments : Plant Love Not Hate

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Luna and welcome to the site.

    What a lovely little first offering from you here and dripping in truths that you have conveyed with excellent metaphors.
    This poem could almost be in the 'love' category but it works well here too, because of the constant use of nature metaphor.
    I love your description of the ivy climbing the walls you have built to defend yourself and then entangling you 'with so much love'.
    Great first write, Luna and I look forward to reading more of your work.

    All the very best
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    A strong root will hold a plant in its place. Ivy is considered a vine that keeps climbing and can get out of control. We often build a wall around us to protect ourselves but love can conquer if. Enjoyed reading. Take care.

  • 9 years ago

    by Kyreeya

    Hello I feel that is so true.
    There are people that are like ivy and some that help and heal you. I enjoyed reading this poem. :)