Comments : Natures Talents

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Elijah, I like the imagery in this piece it's beautiful.

    The word 'marriakas' is spelt maracas in stanza 5.

    Close your eyes and hear the music of life , sounds of joy , so many children playing and talking at the same time , exquisite sounds , they have potential for success , the sounds of clapping hands , give them a round of applause.
    ^^
    This is my fave stanza because children are the best thing in the world. Their laughter is so innocent and fills me with joy . I love when kids come into my shops. They are our future after all :)

    Take care, Em