Kaylie-

I love this poem.

It's elegant and a comforting message. We all have felt alone within times of our lives and this message for me, says that the lonely are the most precious because they are the ones to be there to comfort others....

truly a lovely poem!

Hello,

A nice write. I like the form; this makes it easy to read. The theme of 'caring people ' watching, looking in from the 'shadows ' is one many here can relate to. They care, we care, but we stay in the relative safety of the shadows.

It looks like you're stepping out. Good for you!

Take care,

Michael

Kaylie, this is lovely-I like the thought of someone watching and looking out for another. Your words strike me as you being a very caring person who would like someone to care and look out for you as much as you do for them. Take care-Brenda

I can relate to this

Kaylie,

This is deep and somewhat comforting. I like your stuff.

Em