That was a really cute poem..... Keep writing ... i can relate .... check out some of my poems some time if you want ...

geeeeez! Thats amazing...its hard to express what one feels for ones first love...You managed to hit the nail right on the head, if i may be so cliche, but i feel you really managed to capture a good deal of it consisely and accurately, and it flows really well. good job

I just want to say, its so good i read it again. Over and over, If i could i'd rate it a 10.