Fantastic piece from you Nate'..The ryhming is just simple yet perfect..But what I like more here is the image that you created for I could almost see the children with you in the warmth of the house.

Rsan

Nate, this is beautiful and brought a tear to my eye. It shows that you love your children but possibly you can't do these things with then a much as you'd possibly like to.

The piece itself is so smooth and the rhythm is unforced which makes it more enjoyable to read.

Take care, Em

This was a beautiful write. As a mother, I feel your longing for those moments with your kids. This was a well-written, heartwarming poem.