Comments : Wait for me ma ma (Haiku)

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    Down the grassy knoll
    ewes trot to a low lush field:
    lambs gambol behind.

    I like this...the whole thought of spring arriving as we are heading into winter down under makes me a little jealous :) I don't hear the word 'knoll' too much these days and it was a pleasure to jolt my memory back. Slight suggestion...I'd change the last line around ...

    behind, lambs gambol.

    Just my thoughts...:)

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Aww, I just love the lambs! So lovely!