Comments : Fear (Tanka style)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Perfect and many people can relate with the fear of the dentist. Another elegant piece and maybe not true to it's form as you stated but is still done well.

    All the best, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Michael

    You're turning them out a fair rate of knots at the moment but unfortunately I am unable to do your work justice with my commenting as I am awaiting a new laptop and am on a damned tablet.
    A quick suggestion on the poem, though - do try and stick to the form old chap...:-)

    Just kiddindg - what point artistic license if not for times like these?

    All the best
    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Very funny! :O)

      Not your comment, the fact you have worn your poor old laptop out, and you are resorting to an inferior, not so 'smart' technology! lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Oh, laugh and make jest whilst Im down on bended knee why don't you?

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Okay, I am feeling a tad guilty for mocking such a fine chap as yourself. Surely it's Pimms o'clock?

  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I certainly can relate and I absolutely fear a dentist because it's connected to pain. Thank you for sharing. Take care

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Pims o clock? In this weather, it would be rude not to...