Hi, i liked the references to different weathers especially as they reflect your mood within the piece or so I think.

The sun shining down upon us can make us all abit happier, then the storms come and we feel sadder. Like in winter and the blues.

For I am colder than the bright blanket
That covers the earth with death
The wind brings down the rain of my sorrows
The tears that fight off hatred and hide death
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I love this part because we have all likely been there feeling colder than the breeze and sorrowful for it. I know I have.

The wind of renewal
Brings back a rainbow
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Also love this bit because after everything there is always a silver lining (hopefully) every storm brings out the rainbow. Love the imagery throughout.

Em