Comments : Tomorrow Is"nt Promised....

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lol, Olwin

    Your footnote (at the top of the page :) ) had me in stitches.
    I will come back to this when it is in its completion, but let me just say that the content here is a great stand alone piece anyway.
    Inspiring and cheerful throughout - what better sort of poem to read on a warm, sunny day?

    Take care and all the best,

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy


    I like the way this poem starts - It is so frustrating when an inspiration word, idea or sentence is lost. I wonder where they go? There must be libraries of poetry anthologies up in the ether...

    This is an inspirational write. Living for today and not spoiling what we've got worrying about tomorrow.

    I guess it is all about faith, faith in 'him' and perhaps more importantly in ourselves.

    Thank you for posting this.

    Take care,


  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Olwin, as the others have said it's quite frustrating when we lose something we wrote. I once wrote a full poem which I was impressed by and forgot so save it and didn't have a clue what I'd just written lol

    Anyway this piece alone is beautifully I think and is quite a personal write as though we have put off days we should believe in 'him' but most importantly ourselves because in all honesty if we don't believe in ourselves who else will.

    Very inspirational, Em