Comments : Sugar

  • 7 years ago

    by Marvellous

    The right answer, solves a problem. If it's not working, it's faulty.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Love really can be a lot to handle sometimes, can't it? Especially when it's as passionate and full on as this one sounds.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Another enthralling write. We always seem to go for those that make life that bit harder even though they may taste sweet they're not. I like the metaphors in this piece and the subtle rhymes.
    Em