Comments : Rain

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Augastus

    I like poetry and stories with a moral (I often read Fables) and this is an excellent little write.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

  • 4 years ago

    by Em

    Augastus, a deep meaningful poem.
    Money is the root to al evil I feel is the message unless honest to yourself.

    Em

  • 4 years ago

    by Mayday

    I have chills. I mean, this is...a pretty creepy foreshadowing. One that I can agree with though. I agree with Em, Money makes people do despicable things...
    money and everything else on this earth is only ephemeral
    Anyway - I really liked this!

    5/5 :)