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by Ben Pickard
What an original piece of poetry with lovely, flowing rhyme.
Well done and all the best,
As Ben said this is an original piece. it's beautifully written with great rhyming and imagery.
by Mr. Darcy
Original and interesting.
Space Monkey comes across as a bad, abusive Monkey. The relationship between you and he are entwined, one implicitly linked to the other.
Could space be the deep thought, trance like affect that induces the abusive Monkey?
Interesting write! Mr. Monkey is not very nice, is he? One typo in second life, to should be too. Other than that I really enjoyed this, flowed beautifully.