Comments : Artificial

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Shadow

    Excellent poem, excellent content and excellent rhyming. The last two lines I thought were particularly effective. Well done on a great write,

    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by shadow

      Thank you Ben, much appreciated on the kind words.

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Another really good write. I felt your sadness s you described trying to navigate in this world. It's not easy, that's for sure. Stay strong and keep pushing on. Well done-

    • 9 years ago

      by shadow

      Thank you Brenda. Happy to hear from a fellow writer who just "gets it". Appreciate the positive comments!