Comments : Abba Father

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    I hope you're well.

    This is a wonderfully written poem. The form of rhymed stanzas, a,a,b,b which flows effortlessly of the page is a pleasure to read. The poem seems to be of a personal nature, but the imagery is superb and though steeped in mystery for me, I found it to be honest and beautiful.

    Well done and take care,

    Michael

  • 5 years ago

    by Em

    This is wonderful. The rhyming is superb and makes it all the better to read.

    Em