Comments : If I Could

  • 5 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    5/5 Definitely can relate... Great job!

  • 5 years ago

    by anand singh

    A sad yet beautifully penned piece. I enjoy reading this piece. Good job.

  • 5 years ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    Sad though beautiful to its core....

  • 4 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This struck me with a heartrending pang of loss and confusion. Not confusion in the way that you wrote, but in the ways that I didn't really expect such an earth-shattering piece from the title. While I would have liked to see more diversity in the sentence structure or the style of this, I was completely overwhelmed by the emotion and voice.