This is excellent, Amariah. I love reading and writing nature pieces and I have read two from you in five minutes!
To be honest, like so many other forms, the triolet is one I have meant to try and will get onto eventually.

You mentioned that you had added me to your favourites - you are now well and truly in mine, also.

Great stuff,

SL

Wonderful-as a nature write it really weaves a lovely story-

This is beautiful, the imagery is perfect.
I will have to look this up as not familiar with this form, maybe a footnote would help?

Em