Comments : God's poker face

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Annie and welcome to the site.

    This poem is very good and reminded me a little of myself. I have to confess to being a bit of a tearaway in my youth and made a fair few mistakes, but then I met my wife and had children and everything changed.
    As you point out, there's no more room for errors from that point on as the loss of a child's love would be something most parents simply couldn't live with.
    Well done on this and keep writing,

    SL

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    *double post

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Annie, what a fantastically written piece about finding that special someone and having children, as Sir L from that moment no more mistakes though some do make them.

    All the best, Em