A very touching piece you have written here.

wanting to always be with you

until this life runs out of me.
^^
This stuck out because you obviously love this person so much that you want to be with them for the rest of your life or theirs.

Em
Ps, glad its been nominated

Such a beautifully written poem, so much longing, so much love for that other very special person. What I always love about your writes is how richly visual they are-just lovely!