Judging Comment:

This piece is extremely interesting and well thought out. The style is eye catching and keeps the audience engaged through a few different means. There is an interesting lack of capitalization and punctuation, but honestly it seems to work here in this piece. It does a great job of leaving the reader in thought. A lot of unusual skills are profoundly utilized within this write this week.

P.s. I'm truly surprised there are not more comments on this.

Cradle to womb
raised by ignorance
parentally entombed
stripped of my innocence.

May I say your way with words is amazing.
I was just reading through but with the way you started it made me want to keep on reading.

seeking sweet redemption for the worst of my sins
where the path towards salvation ends manipulation so begins"

Seeking sweet redemption for the worst of my sin.

beautiful catch phrase.

Let me just say... this is the best I have read of " Faith and religion "

Shanky