Comments : First True Love

  • 7 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    What a fantastic poem. You are done this very nicely. Filled with lots of loving emotions. Yes, first love truely magnificent, I agree.

    Very well written. All the best.

  • 7 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Well writen Kips! The emotion of Love is clearly seen here in your write giving great imagery!
    I liked it.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    So lovely!