Comments : You/Me/You

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    I just loved this-beautifully written-

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    This is awesome, I love how it flows and your word choice is spot on.

    The finish though.

    "i can feel you changing
    my bone density. "

    ^^^
    Genius.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Ether, this is absolutely stunning. I love your word choice and the short, sharp sentences. They mean alot to you (I feel) and many of us can definitely relate when that certain person stays in our memory forever even if we don't want them there and nothing inparticular sets us off.

    Em