Comments : Journey of a flower

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Superb haiku. Great imagery and with a jolt at the end.

    Keep writing, I like it!!

    • 9 years ago

      by Trish

      I thank you so very much for the kind words.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Yes, this almost has a senryu type ending - it hits you square in the face!
    This really is a very accomplished haiku from you. Well done and a warm welcome to the site,

    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Trish

      Thanks for the welcome and the encouragement :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Koan

    Efflorescence!!!! what a wonderful word!!!! Love this poem , thx for sharing it..

    • 9 years ago

      by Trish

      Thanks for the read, much appreciated

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Brilliant!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is just lovely! Well done-

  • 5 years ago

    by Jane Do-Re-Mi

    This was lovely.