Hello Krystal and congratulations on an original first post from you.
It almost reads as a rather clever little tongue twister. I like the way the lines become shorter and shorter, climaxing in an abrupt and brutal end!

well done,

Ben

Very nice, I loved the way it flowed and the context was spot on. Well done-

What a stunning, unique piece of poetry.
I have found myself saying this alot lately but love can make or break us.

Em