Comments : Just miss me

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Kelly,

    It seems like this is a typical case of being reeled in just to be cast off again, without remorse. These kinds of situations - indeed, people - should be avoided at all costs.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by kelly r

      Hi ben,
      Thank you for the comment.
      Last time I uploaded a poem someone read it and gave me suggestions on how I could make it better, I guess I like the critic. I'm not really a write I just love to write.
      So if any suggestions please let me know thank you.

      Renee