Hi, this is a great first write by you and the rhyming is unforced which makes the piece much smoother to read.

New romance will tell a story
May be I've seen so many times!
And I want to get no worries
But the hopes are still alive.
^^
My fave part.
Em

Welcome to the site.

As Em says, this is a very good first post from you with nice, tight stanzas and some good rhyming throughout.

Keep writing and all the best,

Ben

This is a breathtaking piece.
It's smooth, it's easy to read,
And it says a lot of things.
Great first write indeed!
5/5

Not a problem..