Comments : Mind

  • 7 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Excellent try here, I must say. Enjoyed the deft rhymes, at some point. Close your eyes, lose your mind, OBSERVE. There's no doubt at all, you'll get there.

    • 7 years ago

      by sofia

      Thank you.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Sofia,

    I don't need to close my eyes, I just have a few glasses of wine and that seems to do the trick, lol.

    Wonderful write, full of great visuals.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by sofia

      Thank you so much. Didn't thought it would have been so effective

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Lovely imagery.