Comments : My True North...

  • 3 years ago

    by Brenda

    Jenn, such a sad write but hope shines through too-well done-

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Jenn,

    I take it that the ship/storm is an extended metaphor for your steely determination in battling the hardships of life? If I am wrong, and it's literal, I am sorry that you have suffered such a miserable journey!
    Whatever storms we suffer in life, if we grip tight to that helm and cling on for dear life, we are sure to reach calmer seas eventually.
    Well rhymed and well written.

    All the very best,


  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    I can relate all to well to this piece :(