Comments : Rival

  • 3 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Love this!! I wrote a piece about being in the ring a long time ago on my old profile and this brings back memories!

    Great write"

    • 3 years ago

      by Gabriel

      Thanks. I would be interested in reading yours if you still have it?

  • 3 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Excellent poem describing excited passion, with each verse the intensity grows. I wonder now if there's going to be a sequel?

    • 3 years ago

      by Gabriel

      Funny you should ask I was in the process of deciding how to add to it. Whether it will be another piece or an edit will be figured out when I get to finishing it.