Comments : Rival

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Love this!! I wrote a piece about being in the ring a long time ago on my old profile and this brings back memories!

    Great write"

    • 9 years ago

      by Gabriel

      Thanks. I would be interested in reading yours if you still have it?

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Excellent poem describing excited passion, with each verse the intensity grows. I wonder now if there's going to be a sequel?

    • 9 years ago

      by Gabriel

      Funny you should ask I was in the process of deciding how to add to it. Whether it will be another piece or an edit will be figured out when I get to finishing it.

  • 2 days ago

    by Sandra Mansur

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading your poetry. Your words create such strong emotions, but I felt they could become even more powerful with visuals.

    I’m a freelance artist with 3 years of experience, and I can turn the feelings and imagery in your poems into illustrations so readers can actually see the words come to life. We could even start with one poem or a few stanzas as a small project.

    I’d also love to share a few ideas on how visuals could help you reach a wider audience and create another way to benefit from your poetry.

    If you’re interested, feel free to reach me here:

    llunarlibrary@gmail.com
    Instagram: @lunaartsoul

    Warm Regards,
    LunarLibrary