Comments : My Angel, Version 2016

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Tara,

    What a sad and emotionally moving piece of poetry this is. It is written well and has some marvellously fluent rhyming throughout.
    I particularly liked the way you changed the layout at the end; short, sharp lines which drive the emotion in your words home.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    As Ben said this is a very emotional piece, there are no words for this...

    Em

  • 3 years ago

    by Randy Lee

    Am I completely off track, or is this a poem more about healing and hope, than it is about sadness? I have missed your words so very much! Who knows, maybe its time for me to try and write something.

    Love,
    Randy Lee

  • 3 years ago

    by Brenda

    Tara, such a sad write-the longing comes through in waves. Losing a child is the absolute worse-well done and I'm sorry.