Comments : Tell Me How This Feels

  • 3 years ago


    So liked this piece Beautiful Chaos, your work is always up to a very high standard.
    I love how you use your words with some classic lines in your write as always 'Begging for your beating heart', 'Screaming for your soul.' Great work Beautiful Chaos! I enjoyed reading this.

  • 3 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Your imagery here is stunning, and the overall piece is spot on. The only downside about this, which is a personal complaint, is the fact that the every line capitalizations get annoying after a while.

    Anyway, the imagery adds to your flow and this is absolutely captivating. Great piece!