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  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    This is deep and happens too often, the subject needs highlighting. Well done

    • 9 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, this was actually a short story I was working on but I decided to turn it into a poem instead.

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Kasie, its unfortunate that this continues to happen. I felt you did a really nice write shedding light on this practice. Nice rhyming throughout, well done-

    • 9 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you