Comments : Could we ever be together?

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A sad poem indeed and a perfect example of that wretched phenomenon - unrequited love.

    Well written and laid out,

    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by HeeraPark

      I still need to workout on my grammar.

      Thanks Ben :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    When love isn't returned it can break us that little bit more but I guess what we have to do is move on, let then go and if it was ever meant to be then they'll come back. Don't beat yourself up.
    Em

    • 9 years ago

      by HeeraPark

      Well, the hardest part is to move on and letting it go.

      thanks for your comment em :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    I know you Korean take love very seriously. Seems like you a beginner, so my wish for you to go very far in this field. A very nice poem.

    Hope the good days will come for you with him in the great city - Seoul.

    • 9 years ago

      by HeeraPark

      Yes, I am a beginner. Need to study more in writing a good poems in the future.

      Thanks!