Comments : Intersections

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A warm welcome to the site.

    If you keep writing such marvellously vague and descriptive poetry like this, you will soon establish yourself one of the site's best. A very good write.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Saakiel

      Thanks Ben. I like 'vague' as an identifier of my poems. :)

      xxx

  • 7 years ago

    by Phil

    This is fantastic. We all have our paths to walk along, I think the key is do the best we can without judging anyone else unless we have the guts to walk even a second in their shoes.

    • 7 years ago

      by Saakiel

      Hi Phil,
      Thanks for leaving your perspective about this piece. It means a lot. Yes definitely we have out own paths to travel. However as it may seem about pursuing our own journey, this piece isn't about it. But still I appreciate you making sense out of my work. Kudos.

      xxx

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Your word choice in this piece is captivating and the style is extremely unique. And I absolutely fell in love with the voice you've displayed.

    Happy writing, and if you ever want to request comments on your pieces, feel free to message me!

    • 7 years ago

      by Saakiel

      Thank you. I'm happy this piece come across that way to you.

      xxx

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I love when a piece is so vague but is totally understood! Another great piece here.