Comments : No. 2

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    The repetition in the first stanza annoyed me, but once I got down to the meat of this piece I really felt your pain. I got your story and your voice and all the angry sadness that is swelling from your words here.

    great job.

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    The repetition in the first stanza annoyed me, but once I got down to the meat of this piece I really felt your pain. I got your story and your voice and all the angry sadness that is swelling from your words here.

    great job.

    • 5 years ago

      by Gretta

      Glad you understand it, thanks!