The repetition in the first stanza annoyed me, but once I got down to the meat of this piece I really felt your pain. I got your story and your voice and all the angry sadness that is swelling from your words here.

great job.

The repetition in the first stanza annoyed me, but once I got down to the meat of this piece I really felt your pain. I got your story and your voice and all the angry sadness that is swelling from your words here.

great job.