Comments : whiteness

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Karla,

    Just beautiful!!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    some may think there's no beauty
    in a blank page but i see a world
    hidden beneath it

    ^^

    I love this. I often feel the same sort of way: that the words to create beauty are there, all around us, and just need 'plucking' from the air and written in a certain way and that's fascinating and wonderful all at once.

    A wonderful poem,

    Ben

  • 3 years ago

    by Hellon

    Congrats on your win Karla...very well deserved. Really loved this stanza...

    oh enchantment! let me sink
    in your multiple voices,
    in your illusion and faith
    because this page is part of my uthopy
    and it needs me to be perplexing
    and infinite.

  • 3 years ago

    by Aegis

    "a heart pulses, a petal falls,
    an egg breaks and poetry is there:
    so fragile and intense."

    I absolutely love that stanza<3 Great job on a well deserved win:)

  • 3 years ago

    by Ren

    This is amazing! What a beautiful poem and a tribute to poetry itself!
    Wonderful! Congrats on the win!

  • 3 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congratulations on your masterpiece. Sooooooo beautiful

  • 3 years ago

    by Brittany

    another one of my favorites!

  • 3 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    What a truly beautiful piece about the beauty of poetry! The blank page is our mystery, the pen unfolds it. Loved this so much. Great write!