Meena this is wonderful, I've heard of this form although have never tried it.
Sometimes writing in forms ( although i love it) can be hard to do as the piece can sometimes sound forced due to the restraints imposed by the rules, here is far from the case, your poem flows nicely within the form and your word choice is great!
3 years ago
Very clean cut! There are so much detals and expertise in writing this poem that do not come to the eyes, making it so easy and wonderful to read.