Comments : I Crave Your Kiss At Night Poem (Villanelle)

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is just lovely. Neat format and poem style. Loved the way this flowed.

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This looks like a tricky form - here is the form for others to read, Wikipedia:

    The villanelle consists of five stanzas of three lines (tercets) followed by a single stanza of four lines (a quatrain) for a total of nineteen lines.[21] It is structured by two repeating rhymes and two refrains: the first line of the first stanza serves as the last line of the second and fourth stanzas, and the third line of the first stanza serves as the last line of the third and fifth stanzas.[21] The rhyme-and-refrain pattern of the villanelle can be schematized as A1bA2 abA1 abA2 abA1 abA2 abA1A2 where letters ("a" and "b") indicate the two rhyme sounds, upper case indicates a refrain ("A"), and superscript numerals (1 and 2) indicate Refrain 1 and Refrain 2.[6]

    Well done, a lovely piece of formed poetry.