Comments : What are you afraid of?

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Truly, that is the way
    To die while still breathing,
    To walk around as a broken porcelain figure,
    With all the pieces intact
    But with the centerpiece missing.

    ^^

    This stanza is exceptional.

    A finely piece of prose/poetry telling the tale of that frightening phenomenon: unrequited love.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben