Hello Michael,

This poem flows with a beautiful rhyme rythem....I love this peice!
Nominating!

I completely agree!

This poem is intriguing and has a beautiful rhyming flow!

I'm so glad it's nominated! :)

I've been reading alot of peoples work i've not read before, this is the first i've read from you and i have to say you've done a stella job! (non alcohol related hahaha)

word choice and flow is great, awesome writing sir!

all the best

Ben

Best poem.